小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；多多加强从句和复杂句的使用。

I have a warmly house.In here ,I feel happy every day.Today,My father went wrok at 7:00a.m,He usually go work by bus.My mother brought my young brother go to shool at 7:20a.m,They often take a bus .my young call a phone with me,she lived at my grandmother's ,My parents and my young brother ,I often go there and visit them. When I feel unhappy,they are always by my side .I love them very much.