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We live in a standard house at the fifth floor.The block did not have a lift. It is not too spaciously but comfortable. It is just about 50 squares with five people live there. There are two bedrooms, one living room, one toilet and one kitchen. All furniture are new equipped at last new year. When you get in our room, you will see the kitchen first. A big cupboard stand there. And all kinds of tools you can find in the table. We cooked everyday there. Next to the kitchen, it is our living room. A large TV on the white wall, we can watch TV and play games in the room, and we often have meeting there. The bedroom is that I would like to talk the most. There are different color in different room. One is green and the other is blue. My brother and I lived in the green one.