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Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important and traditional festivals in China.Since thousands years ago,Chinese have celebrated the festival on lunar August 15th.On the festival all the family member will have a rich supper together.Moon cake is the food which is the signal food of Mid-Autumn. The family eat it enjoyable while they talk in the moonlight. So in Chinese'eyes, Mid-Autumn is another word for reunion.