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Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday. Then he by cycle to parck, He had very fun on the parck. He and his parents had lunch at McDonald's in the middle. In the afternoon Sam and his classmates played the basketball in the scholl, from four to six p.m.. After dinner, Sam and his father went for a walk, his father baught a piece of classical music CD. What a fun day Sam had!