文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;衔接成分很少出现,文章结构欠严谨;
Hello, my name is Lucy King. I am 13 now. I am from English. I like sports, music and movies. I want to have a Chinese pen pal. Because I love China very much and I want to know more knowledge about China. I hope meet a Chinese girl that has some hobbies with me. And I can study Chinese with her. Give me your letter, good pen pal.