文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词;
Hello, my name is Lucy King. I am 13 now. I am from English. I like sports, music and movies. I want to have a Chinese pen pal. I love China very much and I want to know more about China knowledge. I hope that meet a Chinese girl that has some hobbies with me. And I can study Chinese with her. Give me your letter, good pen pal.