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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
During my summer vocation, I stay at Guangzhou with my friends and my colleagues. Today is Thursday, August, 15th. It's rainy. And Today is one ordinary day in my summer holiday. I got up early at 7 o'clock in this morning, then I brushed my teeth and washed my face. Before my breakfast, I practiced my oral English in my bedroom for thirty minutes. I used to speak loudly in my own bedroom. Then I prepared our breakfast for the whole family. We used to eat usual food, such as,fried eggs, noodles, cookies, milk and so on. We often listen to the radio when we have breakfast, we like the news program. On the daytime, I always do some readings, I read broadly and enjoy it. And I like to do some housework with my mom. It can release my mom's stress. In the afternoon, I would like to play football or do some exercises in our yard. It makes me feel more comfortable and powerful. In the evening, I prefer watch TV with my parents to go shopping outside. We always enjoy the moment when we get together. But the holiday will go over soon, I am looking forward to the next holiday yet.
