新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达（2）：给大卫的一封信

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少；

Dear David, I was glad when I heard of you will come to LanZhou to study Chinese.I will help you in how to learn Chinese.First,you should communicate to your Chinese friends.Then,you should accumulate some Chinese vocabulary and sentences.What's more you should have a good a good attitude to study.That'all. Hope everything is going on well with you. Yours, Chen Quan