新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达（2）：给大卫的一封信

简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少；

Dear David, I was glad when I heard of you will come to LanZhou to study Chinese.I will help you in how to learn Chinese.First,you should communicate to your Chinese friends.Then,you should build up a useful vocabulary.What's more you should have a good attitude to study.That'all. Hope everything is going on well with you. Yours, Chen Quan