七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

注意句式在文中的变化，加强一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写。

Last year,sam got up six am，and then he came to park by his bike.he was very happy.And in the afternoon his parents and he have a lunch in the McDonald`s.Then he with his friends play basketball in their school from 4 pm to 6pm.After thier dinner he with his father go for a walk，his father by a CD for he.how interstating day sam has！