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Last year,Sam got up six am,and then he came to park by his bike.he was very happy.And in the afternoon his parents and he have lunch in the McDonald`s.Then he with his friends play basketball in their school from 4 pm to 6pm.After thier dinner, he with his father go for a walk,his father by a CD for he.how interstating day Sam has!