正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,对拼写检查也要重视。
Our monitor is a very beautiful girl. Her name is H. She is twelve years old. She has big eyes and a small mouth. She likes smile and has a warm heart. She is a little girl that like a delicate doll and she always in the school-clothes. The school-clothes is white and black. It's very simpe.