七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；复杂句使用不错，但句法错误偏多；文中有较多拼写错误，请作者增加词汇量的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Sam got up for six o'clock yesterday, at then he rode bicycle to the garden, he was very enjoyed in the graden, at noon, he gone to Mcdonald's have lunch with he's parents, he play basketball with his classmates after the lunch, they playing it from four's o'clock untill six o'clock, after the supper, Sam with he father go for a walk, he's buy a CD music to he