七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

从句过少，且需注意文中个别句子错误；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

Sam get up at six o'clock yesterday ,Then go to park by bike, he play very happy.he go to mcdongald's have lunch with parens at the midday parents, he go to basketball with classmate ,from at 16:00 to at 18:00.After supper ,Sam go for a with his father ,his father give he a CD. This today,Sam live very happily the day.