简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;文章词汇不够丰富,但单词拼写要认真检查;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Yesterday I was very busy. I got up early and took bus to my friend's school. She is my best friend, not one of. When I met her at ten o'clock that means I spent three hours to take bus. But I was happyiess that moment. Maybe four o'clock p.m. I back to my school by bus. At seven o'clock, I remembered to do my homework that handed it in my tearcher last week. I was tired and hungry, but I must do it. What a busy day, I had.