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七年级英语下册Unit10 单元测试试卷作文附范文:My Busy Day

发布时间:2013-05-28 23:08浏览次数:1919
要求:
以 "My Busy Day"为题描述你昨天的活动情况
用户的作文(系统评分51.5分
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希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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Yesterday I was very busy. I got up early and took bus to my friend's school. She is my best friend, not one of. When I met her at ten o'clock that means I took three hours time to take the bus. But I was happy to meet her when I have time. Maybe four o'clock p.m. I back to my school by bus. At seven o'clock, I remembered to do my homework that handed it in my teacher last week. I was tired and hungry, but I must do it. What a busy day, I had.

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