小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

I have a good friend.She is a beautiful girl.and she has long black hair,two big black eyes and a red mouth.her voice is better.she is good at singing. She is a clever girl.She likes reading books ,playing computer games and chess. she is also nice.she often helps us.our classmates like her very much.