增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,注意文中少数拼写错误;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. And she has long black hair. Two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better. She's voice good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books. Playing computer games and chess. She's also nice person. She at everyday often helps us. Our classmates like her very much. Becase she's nice friend.