文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. And she has long black hair. Two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better. She's good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books. Playing computer games and chess. She's also nice person. She at everyday often helps us. Our classmates like her very much. Because she's nice friend.