文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. And she has long black hair. Two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better. She's good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books. Playing computer games and chess. She's also nice person. She at everyday often helps us. Our classmates like her very much. Because she's a nice friend.