正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. And she has long black hair. Two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better. She's voice good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books. Playing computer games and chess. She's also nice person. She at everyday often helps us. Our classmates like her very much.