小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

I have a good friend. She is name susan. She is from Canada. She is a beautiful and clever girl. She has long black hair. Two big black eyes and a red mouth. voice is better. She is good at singing. She likes reading books. Play computer games and chess. She is also nice person. She often helps us. Our classmates like her very much.