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I have a pet.Is a big dog.He's a boy dogHe's name snow.He's three years old.He's a Border Collie.He very clever and cute.My family love him.He's like ball.playing the very nice.He color is black and white.Our neighbour very like him.Because him is clever and very lovely.So,this is my pet.DO you like it?