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I have a pet.Is a big dog.He's a boy dog.He's name snow.He's three years old.He's a Border Collie.My family love him.He's like ball so much.It plays with the ball very nice.He color is black and white.Our neighbour very like him.Because him is clever and very lovely.So,this is my pet.DO you like it?