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I have a pet.Is a big dog.He's a boy dog.He's name snow.He's three years old.He's a Border Collie.My family love him.He's like ball so much.He plays with the ball very nice.Its body color is black and white.Our neighbors all like him very much.Because him is clever and very lovely.So,this is my pet.DO you like it?