小学二年级英语作文:My pet

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I have a pet.Is a big dog.He's a boy dog.He's name snow.He's three years old.He's a Border Collie.My family love him.He's like ball so much.He plays with the ball very nice.Its body color is black and white.Our neighbors all like it very much.Because it is clever and very lovely.So,this is my pet.DO you like it?