初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以。

Someone says that eyes are windows of people's heart. So we need protect our eyes. Now everyone like to play the microphone. It makes our eyes become very tired. I think we must decrease time that use our microphone. But not only to use phone but also to use our eyes with wrong means. So we need study some right skill to protect our eyes, such eyes exeicise and proper our reading posture.