文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
Someone says that eyes are windows of people's heart. So we need protect our eyes. Now everyone likes to use the microphone. It makes our eyes become very tired. I think we must decrease time that uses our microphone. But not only to use phone but also to use our eyes with wrong means. So we need study some right skills to protect our eyes, such as eyes exercise and proper our reading the posture.