文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;采用了一些简单的从句。
I have many dreams, they are my hopes about future. I want to become a man that have many skills. I want to see all around the word and I need take happy to everyone. And I want make more money. Because it's not a problem that can slove use to money. I like reading books, so I want have a books' and make other people come in and read they not give me money.