文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中衔接词丰富。
My favourite film is "He is just not love you". Many women'friend often say to them that a man love a woman, if he isn't good to her when she has a wrong love. When I looked at the film, I know I must forget the wrong experience that a man love a woman if he doesn't good to her. We must let ourselves close to truth. In the film, Gigi is my favourite girl,because she is very brave and honest. I like this film, very much.