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My favourite film is "He is just not love you". Many women'friend often say to them that a man loves a woman, if he isn't good to her when she has a bad treatment by a man. When I looked at the film, I know I must forget the wrong experience that a man loves a woman if he doesn't deal well by her. We must let ourselves close to truth. In the film, Gigi is my favourite girl,because she is very brave and honest. I like this film, very much.