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My Summer Camp I like summer camp, because I can study knowledge that about my life and live. This year I during my summer camp with my classmates in the jiangsu provence. During the holiday, we need cooked meals by ourselves and we became someone which united and help each other. I start more and more independent. I like my summer camp.