初一英语作文模拟题:夏令营

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，对拼写检查也要重视；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

My Summer Camp I like summer camp, because I can acquire knowledge that about my life and live. This year I spended my summer camp with my classmates in the jiangsu provence. During the holiday, we need cooked meals by ourselves and we became someone which united and helped each other. I start more and more independent. I like my summer camp.