简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
My Summer Camp I like summer camp, because I can acquire knowledge about my life and live. This year I spent my summer camp with my classmates in the jiangsu provence. During the holiday, we need cooked meals by ourselves and we became someone which united and helped each other. I start more and more independent. I like my summer camp.