七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday.And he went to the park by bike.He had a good time in the park.He and his parents had lunch at McDonald's at noon.Sam and his classmates at school to played basketball this afternoon,staring at four o'clock in the afternoon till six o'clock in the afternoon.After dinner,Sam went for a walk with his father,his father bought a classic music CD for him.What a funny day for Sam!