作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam got up at six o‘clock yesterday. Then he went to park by bike, he have a good time in the park. He had lunch with his parents in McDonald's. Sam and his classmate played basketaball in the school, they played it from 4 to 6 at afternoon. After supper, Sam and his father went for a walk together. his father bought a classical music CD for him. how fun Sam had this day!