文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam got up at six o‘clock yesterday. Then he went to park by bike, he had a good time in the park. He had lunch with his parents in McDonald's. Sam and his classmate played basketball in the school, they played it from 4 to 6 in the afternoon. After supper, Sam and his father went for a walk together. His father bought a classical music CD for him. How fun Sam had a day!