2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

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I had a dream of Alice yesterday,Alice is a beautiful girl, we went to the wonderland .There were a lot of flower in wonderland, the flower talk to us. There were many small animal flying in sky.I tryed to fly,but I can't fly. Alice gave me a special silk coat,so I put on the coat,then I can fly like the animal, I so excited! Suddenly ,I droped ,I cryed: help!!,at last,I weaked up,it was a dream