正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂,需要多使用一些高级词汇;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
My Net Friend I have a net friend. We meet each other through the computer. She is a very funny girl. She like read books and exchenges her thinks about these books. She is an interesting girl that often talk me multifarious jokes. We always discuss ourselves life, happiness or sadness. Sometimes we can go very far to see. She is my net friend.