正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,高级词汇使用过少;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
My Net Friend I have a net friend. We meet each other through the computer. She is a very funny girl. She likes reading books and exchanges her thinks about these books. She is an interesting girl that often talks me multifarious jokes. We always discuss ourselves life, happiness or sadness. Sometimes we can go very far to see. She is my net friend.