2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真。

I consider this is the biggest thing for maintain trust. In the world is have a lot of bad example for disnorest. This is a real story for you ,one day ,I saw a child fllowing his father walking on a park's path,the baby said he is thirsty,the man see surroundings there no a retail shop ,the baby to hold to tired,he asked me for a eye to his child ,suddendly ,I shocked ,I never thought that one day I will trusted for one.yes ,the man give his child to me hand ,runing out of the path.but you know the ending ,the man even disappeared from that day to today .I trusted his but he is really really dishoest.