2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意文中的几处句子错误；作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写。

I had a dream of Alice yesterday, I saw Alice in my dream,she was a beautiful girl. she took me the wonderland ,there were many kind of diffent flowers，those flowers can speak, many small animal flyed in the sky,I tried my best to fly,but failured. Alice gave me a special silk coat, I ptut it on and flyed as tall as them. how exciiting i was, suddenly,I droped and shout at ,then I waked up, it was a dream