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七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文:有趣的一天

发布时间:2013-06-19 16:11浏览次数:17702
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Sam昨天六点钟起床。然后骑自行车去公园,他在公园玩得很开心。中午和父母在麦当劳(McDonald’s)吃午饭。下午Sam和他的同学在学校打篮球,从下午四点一直打到(till)下午六点。晚饭后,Sam和父亲一起散步(go for a walk),父亲给他买了一张古典音乐CD。这一天Sam过得多么有趣啊!
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

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Yesterday,Sam had a very pleasant day with her parents.What did they do,the most surprising thing about it,however,was that she met a strange thing that she had never seen it.She got up early in the morning and washed quickly and then she went to a public park by bicycle.She enjoyed herself too much. After having a good time,she had an appointment with her family at McDonald's.On arriving went there,her parents was waiting for her for a long time.They had lunch together.From four o'clock till six o'clock,she played games on the playground.At that time,she nearly hurt herself,finally,she was all right.Her classmates advised her that she had better do not that any more.She come back home while her mother was cooking a meal for her and her father was reading newspaper in the living room.Her father would like to go for a walk after dinner,Sam agreed.The father bought her a classic CD player.She was really happy yesterday.What a pleasant day!

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