2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦167:钢琴家

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langlang profession: pianist experience: he was born in1982 in shenyang china. he has lentened piano sinc three yeas old. he went to amlric to learned music for fourteen. he have mede huge success in music,and give concert all around the world. he showed with many famous musician. he wined lot of prize. I like his music,i feel the spring coming when he play the piano