文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Hello,my name is Lucy King.I am from the UK .I can say English.Because i love Chinase and i want to know more about China. So i want to find a Pen pal wanted.I wish she has some hobbies like sports, music,and movies.And she can teach me Chinase. Please write and tell me about yourself.