文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
Hello,my name is Lucy King.I am from the UK.I can say English.Because of I love Chinase and I want to know more about China. So i want to find a Pen pal wanted.I wish she has some hobbies like sports, music,and movies.And she can teach me Chinase. Please write and tell me about yourself.