高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误；文章词汇表达丰富度要提高，拼写错误比较多。

My favirate sport is to play soccor.This is a magical.By chance i already love playing soccor.When i through the route of my came back hom get a soccor and then play with my friends,i just deeply love it.So i often with claamate together accept traning and attend to compain.And i most like a soccer star who is becham in English.all the timg,my large achivement is become a professional football player.