单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Sam got up at six o’clock yesterday. Then he went to park on bike. He played very happy in park. At noon, he had lunch with his parents at McDonald’s. He played basketball with his classmate from four to six. It is very funning. After dinner, he went for a walk with his father, his father bought a musical CD for him. This is a fun day to Sam.