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Sam got up at six o’clock yesterday. Then he rode bike to park. It glad to him played in park. At noon, he had lunch with his parents at McDonald’s. He played basketball with his classmate from four to six. It is very funning. After dinner, he went for a walk with his father and his father bought a musical CD for him. What a happy day Sam had!