增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
Tom is a good boy for his life regulaly. He usually get up at 6 am and go to school at 6:15 am ,as he doesn't eat outside.Tom always doesn't listen to music on school days,and doesn't watch Tv on school nights,and is back home by 12 am and by 9:20 pm.